Wednesday, January 11, 2017


Keys to your own home


He was trying Ashima's number, every-time he got the same message, "Number unreachable."

Pratik wasn't feeling well, so he took break from office & started for home.

He saw the keys dangling on the main door.

He thought that someone has barged in his house & he lost all that he had earned.

He tip-toed inside the house. The whole house was in order.

He was about to enter his bedroom, he overheard whispers of a pair.

When he peeped inside, he was aghast to find his wife in compromising position with his friend.

He was speechless n walked out without protesting.

(Word Count - 100)

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  1. Wow
    Mind blowing
    Now that's quite something.

    But why walk of silently ?

  2. when one is deeply hurt, he moves out without saying anything further, he had lost the game of life

  3. Well certainly in one way
    But sometimes who got to face your failures, to learn out of it?

  4. Not what you would expect but truth is better always. Keep writing.

  5. Thanks for stopping by, it's a fiction.

  6. That's nicely put Ila. It's unfortunate and sad but that's the reality. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction