Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Quadrille #Open

                                                                                Source: varmaila.com

The Darkness melts
Streaks of hues emerges
Dawn sets in
Dispersing brilliancy around.

Wilted flowers bloom
Buds sprout
Amalgamating amazing hues
Springing life & fragrance through.

Life swings in action
After a reverie
Whispers grow loud
Exhaling life around
Minds opens in creating new.

© Ila Varma 13-09-2016
Image Credits: © Ila Varma 

(The life opens up with each dawn and infuses positive energy around energizing each and every life on this huge planet erasing grief.)

Written for the post of dVerse Quadrille #16

30 comments:

  1. I especially like "whispers grow loud."

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  2. As we open up, so many beauties seem to appear. Nice. The prompt asks for the word "open" to be included in the poem (you aren't the only one who misread the prompt--maybe I wasn't clear) and I think if you change the word delve in the last line to open, it would work well.

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    1. Thanks a lot.
      Open added in the verses.

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    2. Victoria, you were perfectly clear. I think people just hopped on the 44 words.

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  3. Whispers grow loud
    Exhaling life around....nice!!

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  4. Lovely reminder of renewal and rebirth. We shared a few words in common too.

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  5. This is so much more than the dawn... wonderful

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  6. 'Whispers grow loud'...love this...

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  7. Excellent quadrille. And glad you changed that word to open. It does add more meaning actually to the whole poem.

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  8. Very nice. I especially like... "Life swings in action/after a reverie". Bringing our dreams really does require an open mind.

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    1. Should have read "Bringing our dreams to life". Got ahead of myself. :)

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  9. LiFe SMiLeS..
    It juSt doEs
    iT as FloWers
    oPen PoLLinAtinG
    otHers more for liGht
    as DancE and SonG
    fears
    no
    liGht..
    dissolves
    Fear for JoY BriGht..
    Open HeArt..
    Frozen
    SpiRiT
    RiSes..
    miNd and
    BoDY BaLanCinG
    soUL Awakes
    En
    liGhTeN
    iNG moRe noW..aTer
    AiR We FloAtinG.. GrAviTy FReED..:)

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  10. Gayle Walters RoseSeptember 15, 2016 6:58 AM

    I like how you bring a sense of renewal with "Life swings in action/After a reverie." Very nice!

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