Friday, August 19, 2016

Break Up

                                                                                     here

You traveled into my crooked life

Demystifying  the clinging slime

Enthusiastic & charged was I

Trusting you would stay by my side

Stretch of trust smiled

Radiance of love sailed

Misunderstandings crept in

Slowly

Chipping the standing relationship

The scars were severe

Than the burns of a bullet

You stood composed

I was queasy & jar

Painstaking was the break up

Snatching life’s radiance.

© Ila Varma 19-08-2016


This post is written for Sunday Scribblings 2, Three Word Wednesday, Wordle261

6 comments:

  1. Poignant. Standing composed in times like these defines a lady. Those lines touched me.

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  2. I know that my ex girlfriend is deeply attached to me, but she felt cheated and left me alone after having a sad conversation. I could make her understand that she is misunderstood, and our relationship came to an end. Now, I know that my girlfriend has realised her mistake, but I am running no contact rule, so that it compels her to come back to me and express her love once again.

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    1. Thanks...Don't over test, bring her back if both ou u readily want to be together

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